tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post3166756022644255204..comments2023-05-22T16:36:49.128+05:30Comments on Vision: क्या कहूँDr. Tripat Mehtahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972787985997523606noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-1532232929962291482010-10-09T16:46:57.832+05:302010-10-09T16:46:57.832+05:30bahut khubsurati se aapne apni feelings ko shabado...bahut khubsurati se aapne apni feelings ko shabado me dala hai....very beautifully written...thanks archanaArchana writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13281387446256155443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-46588963889732681622010-07-13T14:26:09.776+05:302010-07-13T14:26:09.776+05:30काफी सुन्दर शब्दों का प्रयोग किया है आपने अपनी कवि...काफी सुन्दर शब्दों का प्रयोग किया है आपने अपनी कविताओ में सुन्दर अति सुन्दरसंजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-34632509487824427042010-06-28T15:33:35.612+05:302010-06-28T15:33:35.612+05:30bahut hi badhiyabahut hi badhiyaज्योति सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092900119898490662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-23968419964625955032010-06-28T15:07:39.565+05:302010-06-28T15:07:39.565+05:30तुम्हें खुशनुमा हवा का केवल एक झोंका कहूँ
या अन्दर...तुम्हें खुशनुमा हवा का केवल एक झोंका कहूँ<br />या अन्दर तक झंझोड़ देने वाली तीव्र आंधी...<br /><br />तुम्हें मेरी आत्मा को "तृप्त" करने वाला शीतल नीर कहूँ<br />या मेरी देह को अमृत बनाने वाला क्षीर सागर...bahut sundarज्योति सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092900119898490662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-77606969827402315072010-06-27T16:34:31.894+05:302010-06-27T16:34:31.894+05:30@ surinder ji - shukriya
@ Sumit & nil - thank...@ surinder ji - shukriya<br />@ Sumit & nil - thanks<br />@ ismat & bechaen atma - thanks a lot<br />@ adwet - thanks :)<br />@ dr anurag - ji ek hi sitting mein likhi hai :D<br />@ Vandana - thanks :))Dr. Tripat Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972787985997523606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-89494724433889218542010-06-22T23:36:01.046+05:302010-06-22T23:36:01.046+05:30असमन्जस को बहुत खूबसूरती से उकेरा है आपने.असमन्जस को बहुत खूबसूरती से उकेरा है आपने.वन्दना अवस्थी दुबेhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048830323802336861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-14206407564260477052010-06-22T20:29:21.160+05:302010-06-22T20:29:21.160+05:30एक अलग अंदाज़ में लिखी गयी रचना....क्या एक सिटिंग ...एक अलग अंदाज़ में लिखी गयी रचना....क्या एक सिटिंग में लिखी गयी है ?सुन्दर...डॉ .अनुरागhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191025429540788272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-11186916051688700262010-06-22T16:39:42.996+05:302010-06-22T16:39:42.996+05:30बहुत सुंदर... बहुत अच्छी लगी आपकी रचना ...बहुत सुंदर... बहुत अच्छी लगी आपकी रचना ...adwethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06211475970652338527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-83048474886228859422010-06-20T22:44:30.144+05:302010-06-20T22:44:30.144+05:30सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति.सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति.देवेन्द्र पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466843806711544757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-55932647177631267122010-06-20T16:33:27.328+05:302010-06-20T16:33:27.328+05:30बहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति!बहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति!इस्मत ज़ैदीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223313612717175832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-92175101118798452942010-06-13T21:49:38.746+05:302010-06-13T21:49:38.746+05:30Kyaa batau! I'm spellbound!!!!Kyaa batau! I'm spellbound!!!!nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-60629276220379001382010-06-12T10:35:14.428+05:302010-06-12T10:35:14.428+05:30सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति...सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति...Sumit Pratap Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06852765514850701581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-46942214125095206182010-06-09T10:28:05.421+05:302010-06-09T10:28:05.421+05:30Prerna Ji,
Bahut hi sunder lagi aapki rachna, woh...Prerna Ji,<br /><br />Bahut hi sunder lagi aapki rachna, woh Brahm hi hai Ishwar Shrishti Karta, Woh Anek rup banakar manav ka aur dusare sare jivon ka palan haar hai.<br /><br />Surinder RattiSURINDER RATTIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16463726937474940326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-17019766609874387282010-06-06T14:53:36.008+05:302010-06-06T14:53:36.008+05:30thank u all guys :)))))thank u all guys :)))))Dr. Tripat Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972787985997523606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-55583155662119553652010-06-04T13:12:55.797+05:302010-06-04T13:12:55.797+05:30तुम्हें मेरी आत्मा को "तृप्त" करने वाला ...तुम्हें मेरी आत्मा को "तृप्त" करने वाला शीतल नीर कहूँ<br />या मेरी देह को अमृत बनाने वाला क्षीर सागर...<br /><br />very nice lines...luvd ur writingappuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526976041610118640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-86483094345229739582010-06-03T22:51:52.777+05:302010-06-03T22:51:52.777+05:30can only say ki iske baad ab main kya kahun !!!can only say ki iske baad ab main kya kahun !!!Ankithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12248358048149213507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-55324341474904680782010-06-03T22:47:09.046+05:302010-06-03T22:47:09.046+05:30Beautiful,
Awesum ,
Excellent !!!
dil ko chuu lene...Beautiful,<br />Awesum ,<br />Excellent !!!<br />dil ko chuu lene wali rachna hai !!!<br /><br />never came across such a thing before !!!<br />will keep reading am a fan already !!!<br /><br />and<br />thanx for taking time to read my blog and commenting on it !!!<br /><br />Happy Blogging and tk cr !!!Ankithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12248358048149213507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-75297636839242963542010-06-01T14:00:36.757+05:302010-06-01T14:00:36.757+05:30तुम्हारे जीवन में मेरे अस्तित्व को
अपनी खुशनसीबी स...तुम्हारे जीवन में मेरे अस्तित्व को<br />अपनी खुशनसीबी समझूँ<br />या तुम्हारी उदारता का एक सूक्ष्म उद्हारण...<br /><br />सब कुछ ही तो कह दिया आपने ... बहुत अच्छी लगी आपकी रचना ...दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-11629041835380069502010-05-31T15:51:14.954+05:302010-05-31T15:51:14.954+05:30bahoot khoob mere blog par aane ke liye danyvaadbahoot khoob mere blog par aane ke liye danyvaadAkhilesh pal bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06176388027572233336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-40820789912944176822010-05-29T17:25:21.614+05:302010-05-29T17:25:21.614+05:30thanx for commenting on my Blogthanx for commenting on my Blogमाधव( Madhav)https://www.blogger.com/profile/07993697625251806552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-51024841234583256692010-05-27T17:49:10.994+05:302010-05-27T17:49:10.994+05:30प्रेम को शब्दों में बंधना कितना कठिन है..!
..अच्छी...प्रेम को शब्दों में बंधना कितना कठिन है..!<br />..अच्छी कविता के लिए बधाई.देवेन्द्र पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466843806711544757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-80904564588098505712010-05-26T17:17:19.723+05:302010-05-26T17:17:19.723+05:30@ babli- shukriya
@ arunesh, Khushi - dhanyawaad
...@ babli- shukriya<br />@ arunesh, Khushi - dhanyawaad<br /><br />@ shubh - apka blog visit kara tha meine..aapp to pehele se hi itna acha likhte hai...zarroorat nhi hai kisi ke marg darshan ki..bas apni atma ki awaz ko kalam ke zariya kagaz par utaarte rhiye<br /><br />@ Prem - sach kaha..dhanyawad<br /><br />@ Dimps - thsnkd for the inspiration<br /><br />@razi sm and Dr hardeep - bahut bahut shukriya :)Dr. Tripat Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972787985997523606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-13090686361836385482010-05-26T16:53:10.142+05:302010-05-26T16:53:10.142+05:30Tu koee bhee naam de de mujhe,
par apna zroor keh ...Tu koee bhee naam de de mujhe,<br />par apna zroor keh dena- mere apne.<br /><br />Bahut hee sunder rachna hai aap kee.<br />Mubark!<br />Hardeep<br />http://shabdonkaujala.blogspot.comShabad shabad https://www.blogger.com/profile/09078423307831456810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-47468491649225362812010-05-26T16:04:13.068+05:302010-05-26T16:04:13.068+05:30nice poem
very touchingnice poem<br />very touchingsmhttp://realityviews.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738571871159345312.post-5506508260830980882010-05-26T14:28:16.764+05:302010-05-26T14:28:16.764+05:30nice poetrynice poetryRazi Shahabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13193897476357715971noreply@blogger.com